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Would be nice if there were more ROs 😩 I'm more interested in the side characters, like Aleksander, Hale, Gabriel and Aspen etc.

I dont like Amelia bcoz she just doesn't get it. She seems to care about MC but at the same time she keeps downplaying the actions of hunters despite knowing MC deserves better.

Eddie is nice but man he kept brushing me off lmao bro needs to relax more.

and Arlo, I really like him but also can't forgive him since he reminds me of my ex friend. i know how hurt MC feels, to be abandoned by the one who was your everything. I wanna both hug and slap him haha.

The plot is amazing thou and it's enjoyable to play. I hope it isn't abandoned :')

It went back on hiatus in november. Copied and Pasted.

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Wonderful story, although I am curious as to if it is abandoned.

It went back on hiatus in november.

oh

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I'm absolutely loving this! So many emotions. I hope this isn't abandoned and hope you're doing okay! Looking forward to more

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Whoaaaaaaaaaaa~ I live thissss

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AAAAA I just realized Arlo's favorite color is whatever the MC's eye color is. That's so adorable 🥰

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WAIT this is so sweet omg

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IKR Losing my mind over that detail lol ♥ 

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OMG THANK YOU FOR THIS CUTE DETAIL IABSIWGAUA I LOVE THISISISIS

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The attraction and tension with Eddie, or the bittersweet angst with Arlo. Dang it. I can't choose. I love it

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Hey there! Recently i have finished the chapter 3,and i can say easily that is one of the best interactive fictions that i ever read! Hope you can continue this and see how it goes,pretty excited to see my female vampire goes through this thrilling,yet pretty exciting story! Keep up with your great work 😉 ❤️

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Best interactive fiction i've read in a long time. I LOVE THIS 

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i just put the first thing that came to mind for the name lmao

"You open your mouth to interrupt, possibly retract the question before he can answer but he beats you to it. "_____, of course my opinion of you is higher than the Council's. We're business partners, we've built Nachos up from the dirt."

LOL. I put 'hope and Adventure Loving Club' as my club's name. Twas a reference to a webnovel I read.

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ugh this so good GaHHH

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I had fun reading and look forward to more!

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It's baffling to me how you somehow have made this even better than it was before. Like how even!

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wait i noticed theres a new “update” but is there no new chapter? is it just a revamp

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the current chapters were rewritte

Holy hell, so excited!

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Is this game still ongoing?

Updated 20 days after you asked, if you missed that. Hope!

Thank you!!

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I've already fallen in love with Eddie. *sigh* The writing has a moodiness I adore. It just feels wrong in all sorts of right ways. The tension is brilliant. 

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Is this game cancelled?

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Dude im not forgiving amelia 

dude she being a hunter was like ok to me but the fact that you were "druged", hipnotised wathever Is what anoys me

I dont know about you but i really hate when someone mind controls or hipnotises someone without their consent 

I dont even know why im so pissed but is a thing i just really hate that

I hope in the future theres an option of absolute hatred towards this like you get betraid by aida and now by amelia it sucks man like they are toying with you

Ps: the game is super good top 10

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this is so freaking good

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is this abandoned?

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Thank you for the reminder, just posted a devlog. Not abandoned, but on pause!

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Chapter 4? 


(visuals added just to continue the trend reginaBithyniae set like a year ago)

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to be honest with ya I was somewhat hesitant bout this whole thang but now that I've completed it allll 😓

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Honestly one of my favourite IF on this website! The relationships between the characters are just *chef's kiss*. And the ANGST omg THE ANGST. Scratches an itch I didn't even know I had. Thank you for making this honestly. Looking forward to see where you're going to take this story <3

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Woahhh this was such a good interactive fiction, the story was quite intriguing and I love the MC I built up lol. I'm very curious about the history of this story as well as the characters, they're all quite intriguing and fun to read about. It also went well with those dark classical music playlist which really helped pull me in. Keep up the good work and good luck! Writing can be a pain but so worth it!

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The writing is absolutely gorgeous~  I put on some dark classical music in the background and really got immersed in the story and characters, super excited for future updates! :)

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This is great so far, and I'm really looking forward to reading more! Really loving Eddie (I adore classically handsome guys) and I'm intrigued by Aleksander (any chance he is/could be a romance option? I love stoic RO's).
I did notice some spelling mistakes/wrong words/awkward phrasing along the way, but a beta can fix that up easily enough, so no biggie. :)

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Thank you! I'm glad you like Eddie :D There are four ROs which are pretty set as of now. And betas are the dream, I'll be doing a big overhaul after Ch 3 is out, hopefully picking up those mistakes.

oh man this is great! i'm loving everything about this game so far, i cant wait to see where you take it!

I forgot who hale was and idk how to find where he was introduced/who he is

Hey! He was introduced in Ch 1, when you first encounter Eddie.

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hi! the original file is an html file. is that what you mean? otherwise i'd prefer it be non-downloadable to somewhat prevent code-diving (though I'm not sure if I'm even achieving this lol)

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This is amazing, I can't wait to read more. ^_^ I wanted to let you know that we've mentioned it in our list of recommended Twine stories. But if that's not okay just let me know. You can view it here, let us know if there are any other details we should add for your title --> https://itch.io/t/1763600/twine-games-with-character-customization-part-1

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Hi! Thank you so much for including this story :)

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this was amazing, you should make an AI  generated game like this.

❤️💃

Uhm —^— didn't like this high consul, wanna overthrow it. VIVA LA REVOLUCION!... with me as king 🤴 

Waiting for the next update!

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I enjoyed playing this game I can't wait till the next chapter comes out. I loved it<3

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this is really amazing. i couldn't pull myself away from it. i like the options we can have, and especially the characters. The vampires, of course. Really interesting. I hope you will continue. ))

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Chapter 2?

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I love this! This first chapter has really intrigued me and I like all the characters so far. Playing as an old vampire is a fun change of pace because I'm used to seeing mostly new vampires adjusting to their life - it's a bit like skipping the murder of batman's parents because I've already seen it so many times. 

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The most intriguing and polished story experience focused around Vampires Ive read. Good job and keep up the great work.

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What? How can I never come across this before????Thank god that I find it through a recommendation! Definitely looking for more!!!!💃 

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